To her

by John Jack   Nov 17, 2020


I’m kind a loss. The fall betrays me.
My thoughts are faded and obscured.
I came to miserable ending.
There are no chances to be cured.
You turn my penance into loathing
My modest bows became disgrace.
I’m frozen in the silent, mourning
To hear your voice, to see your face.
My every action is invalid.
My words are arrogant for you.
And my wet eyes are whacked and pallid
Hide endless desert that I view.
Can I release this dull exertion?
Can you forgive this foolish thing?
My fairy, lightfull, happy version,
My barely familiar kin.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    Trying to get back into her good graces sounds like its going to be tough. I wish you the best, I felt your pain throughout this write, well done-

    • 4 years ago

      by John Jack

      Thanks you for this words and commpation. Thats cool if I can touch someones heart with my dramatic thoughts.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello John,

    there are some powerful lines here. It feels ardent and yet full of painful optimism.

    Take care.

    • 4 years ago

      by John Jack

      Thanks you. You are experien?ed writter. Can you give me some tips and advices about writting cause english not my native language and some things(about poetry) I acttually dont understand.

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