by Obscure Nov 17, 2020
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I wish to cast off my mortality |
by Obscure
Thank you all so much for commenting! |
by Mr. Darcy
I liked this then and I like it now. Well done. |
Beautifully written. I love the idea of mortality as a coat we just slip off to travel to the next plane. Congrats on a very well deserved win. |
by Star
This has depth, its really beautiful, congrats Obscure ^_^ |
by Keira Pickard
Beautiful and smooth. The similie of a coat for life is perfect... great poem! |