by Everlasting
I enjoyed the repetition of avocets. I had to look that words up and found they were birds. Though the poem gives that away lol. I just had to make sure. |
by Michael
Beautifully done Mr D. They are incredible birds :) |
by prasanna
Wasn't aware of avocets until now, beautiful birds. Loved the repetition, and you certainly did them justice. Glad to see this nominated! |
by Maple Tree
there is a song "The ants go marching two by two harah harah"- I read this poem to the tune of that song :-) |
by Mr. Darcy
aww, thanks. Claire and I were waiting for them to fly into the bay and the first line came to me. Thanks for reading - it means a lot to me x |