Tattered Dreams

Ohhh Kat, so lonely. You are not alone in your grief for a future you do not have.

I like the hard hitting lines, shows the true sadness.

Yes, these are punchy lines which helps with the 'knockout' effect each one carries in content. A hard-hitting piece.

I like punchy verse like this - each one a nugget, like a slow blink, each one revealing a new chapter.