Comments : The Wolves and the Lamb.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I have always felt alone in a crowd. Reading this reminded me of feeling unsafe around others. A school environment is perhaps when I became aware of not belonging. There something nightmarish of being confronted by a bully. Feeling helpless, bring pushed into a corner where you're left with few options. Fight or flee? Your poem had a satisfying twist (and I like those!)

    Nice format throughout.

  • 3 years ago

    by Brenda

    Mary Anne, I truly love the way you bare your heart and soul with your words. Thank you for sharing.