by Xaque Dec 17, 2020
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Nothing about me |
by Meena Krish
A piece which says it all and rhymes tucked in without notice. Nicely penned, a read very much felt. |
by Mr. Darcy
The act of writing on a napkin is the intriguing part for me. Feeling worthless, not even deserving of a piece of paper, not even a scrap. A napkin used to wipe off/up/ away |
by prasanna
The subtle rhyming is sublime, a powerful piece. |
by Skyfire
Like Kiera said, I too love the subtle rhymes! A short poem but speaks a lot of pain. |
by Keira Pickard
There's subtle rhyming throughout this, and it's very powerful. Nice :) |