by Mr. Darcy
In these uncertain times, it's writes like this that bring home the calamity of our situation. The metaphor of white water rafting is a good one. None of us wants to drown and we certainly didn't volunteer for certain death, but that's what many of us ultimately fear. I like your format too, it enables certain words to be highlighted, like: 'tomorrows dreams'. Nicely done. I do like a clever poet who likes to display their message uniquely. |
by Gracy Judith
Thank you Mr Darcy for reading and for your comments. |