Comments : When a man cries

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    As a reader, I can feel your emotions within this piece.. truly heart breaking.

    • 3 years ago

      by Shah

      Thanks, i tried to write down my emotions.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice expression laid out in rhyming couplets.
    Small typo in line 11.

    • 3 years ago

      by Shah

      Thanks for reading my poem...
      I have corrected the mistake