hay fever (syntuit - writing prompt)

It's so hard to write a poem that is so short but the whole story is there plus a joke...lol

Great write..
Gel

You and Ben more than anyone else took to my syntuit form. This poem is masterful. The juxtaposition between the first two lines sets up the intuitive "a-ha" (or in this case the "gotcha") nature of the final line. Told like a dad-joke, it fits the form of the syntuit: 5-7-5 syllable structure, minimal explanation and non-rhyming. It differs from the haiku and senryu form in that it addresses a whimsical topic rather than creating a visual effect.

HA. I enjoyed that.

Brilliant, Michael. Your imagination is boundless and often so full of humour. Where, now, for a horse with hay fever?

I like this one :)
A lot of my family suffers from hay fever, so I know this scene all too well! Nice poem.