Comments : Heart Safe

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Heart safe - nice phrasing :)

    The imagery of a heart wrapped up from every angle with chains was neat. The statement to the wanna be new lover that simply the removal of a chain will not suffice, for this heart, this heart that has been hurt so very badly, that its owner has barricaded it up like a fortress. Inside this rainbow, it may seem beautiful from the outside, but inside it remembers and it forever cries. To gain access to the heart, you must break the safe and to do that you will need to carefully remove each chain and this will take time and trust. If the owner of said, heart safe, needs time, or seems to push away, remember that she is scared of the next heart break, for it might be her last.

    Nice work, Saffie.