Drift

by Skyfire   Jan 3, 2021


Abruptly
like a broken hasp
blown open
all my thoughts fly -
like laundry-line billows,
away
into the clouds.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Abruptly my hasp
    breaks, blowing laundried thoughts
    away with the clouds

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This sounds...relieving. I do love brevity in free verse. Great stuff.

  • 3 years ago

    by Jane Do-Re-Mi

    I loved the comparison of the thoughts and laundry billowing in the wind, it tied in well with your title.

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice little imagery here - day dreaming away letting all those thoughts disappear .

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