by Keira Pickard
This is so full of hope for spring that it's contagious! It's excellent, each line consisting of eight syllables - if my counting is anything to go by - and smooth rhyming. |
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. |
I loved the sense of hope that this poem gave me. I'm not sure if this was totally about nature or if the 'winter' referred to the long drawn out effects of covid but I'm hoping the spring will arrive soon followed by a very long, carefree summer. |
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you. You are right, this poem is more than a nature poem. Winter is the natural choice to reflect what is going on for us all. |
by Meena Krish
This is a lovely Sonnet which gives the reader faith that all will return after the cycle ends and life gets renewed. |
by Mr. Darcy
I'm so glad this has inspired you. It's been a hard year, so having that 'spring to write' will help you and others make it through. |
by Star
I can see how this poem is more than a nature one. Good to read a new sonnet by you! |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks, Star. These sonnets certainly make a mind work. |
Winter - a time of quiet introspection while waiting for spring. |
by Em
Hi. Mr D, the title could mean many things, or could be purely the chill we all feel through winter or it could be something more maybe a person who is lonely and although they live alone, they fe the chill (loneliness) more in winter and I for one know how that feels. They say suicides always go up in winter time and it really doesn't surprise me. |
by Mr. Darcy
Wow Em, thank you so much for this! |