MY SILENT PRAYER

by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`   Jul 13, 2004


MY SILENT PRAYER
Dear God please help me to love the life i have,
Please show me what life can really give,
cause right now its something I'm unable to grab,
the chance to live.
I sit in all my gloom and all my sorrow
with absolutely no hope,
that happiness will be there tomorrow.
So God if you hear my desperate cry,
Won't you send some mercy down,
And give me the strength to give life another try,
God people say your everywhere around,
in peoples hearts in peoples minds,
But i cant seem to grab hold of you,
so this letter I'll write in hope that you'll find it in time.
God I try to follow all your ways
But constantly will i turn my back,
until i need you again,
until my world turns to black.
Lord God please wipe away my every wrong,
Show me that there's more to life
than what i see going on.
This is my silent prayer to you,
cause without you by my side,
i cant make it through.
so here and now i give you my life..

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  • 20 years ago

    by Sonya Marie

    THIS POEM WAS GOING REALLY KOO I THINK IF U WOULD MOVE THE WORDS OR ADD CUZ THE END OF DA POEM DOESN'T REALLY RYME N THE REST DOES SO IT WOULD BE MORE THEN PERFECT IF U CHANGE THE ENDING STARTING "...so here and now i give you my life," AND AFTER THAT BUT U DON'T HAVE TO DO IT BUT THATS MY OPINION ON THAT BUT IT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL JUST MAKE THE END RYME.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sonya Marie

    THIS POEM WAS GOING REALLY KOO I THINK IF U WOULD MOVE THE WORDS OR ADD CUZ THE END OF DA POEM DOESN'T REALLY RYME N THE REST DOES SO IT WOULD BE MORE THEN PERFECT IF U CHANGE THE ENDING STARTING "...so here and now i give you my life," AND AFTER THAT BUT U DON'T HAVE TO DO IT BUT THATS MY OPINION ON THAT BUT IT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL JUST MAKE THE END RYME.