THIS POEM WAS GOING REALLY KOO I THINK IF U WOULD MOVE THE WORDS OR ADD CUZ THE END OF DA POEM DOESN'T REALLY RYME N THE REST DOES SO IT WOULD BE MORE THEN PERFECT IF U CHANGE THE ENDING STARTING "...so here and now i give you my life," AND AFTER THAT BUT U DON'T HAVE TO DO IT BUT THATS MY OPINION ON THAT BUT IT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL JUST MAKE THE END RYME.

THIS POEM WAS GOING REALLY KOO I THINK IF U WOULD MOVE THE WORDS OR ADD CUZ THE END OF DA POEM DOESN'T REALLY RYME N THE REST DOES SO IT WOULD BE MORE THEN PERFECT IF U CHANGE THE ENDING STARTING "...so here and now i give you my life," AND AFTER THAT BUT U DON'T HAVE TO DO IT BUT THATS MY OPINION ON THAT BUT IT WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL JUST MAKE THE END RYME.