Comments : The Desert of Unbelief

  • 3 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    I wrote this Poem as an outreach to those lost Souls. To make it more interesting, I used Metaphorical, Rhyming, real life, and fictitious events, woven into a Biblical type of Poetry. It's a bit long, but I pray that it draws the interest of many.

  • 3 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I love the imagery in this poem, it takes me to another world. I felt like I was in a fantasy movie. In some way you have captured how it feels to have faith, even on the darkest days. :)