by Star
I have to start with how genius the title is, if I'm correct it the distance at which the moon drifts away from earth. That itself is a statement. And also for some reason it feels like you haven't written something like this poem for a while. Loved the first line, its smart too!! There is so much to take from it, and so many parts that left me wandering why you chose the wording (I mean that in a good way :p). |
by Mr. Darcy
Congratulations, I can't believe I forgot to 'like' this. |
by Everlasting
You know? It’s funny. I’ve been trying to figure out who the narrator is in this piece. I can only think that is a vampire because |
by prasanna
You have a lovely way of thinking about things Luce. I'm not too sure myself about what the poem is about, but as for "red earth", it's in reference to a translated poem: |