Whoa! Cassie! This is epic! The fantastical tale you've woven with such wonderful personality, rhyme and rhythm of one little boys' vivid imagination is just awesome. This, with illustrations would make an absolutely fabulous children's book.
I'm in awe. Bloomin' well done! :-) x
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Well done, Cassie. This story of Dan's rabbit hole imagination is truly wonderful.