I got chills!!!!

I have nothing original to comment - I got chills, too!
Wonderful, excellent imagery :)

Hmm, I have been reading this poem for several times now and I just can’t come up with a good comment.

Are you alright? It might be the environment that surrounds me, it’s chilly, but I can’t stop feeling like someone gave up. Like it’s depressing. The tone is almost ghostly like . The images are sharp. The honesty is brutal. The words are like those icicles hanging like daggers as I read them. I hope you are doing well. Take care.

This is a chilling but compelling read. Some very stark vivid visuals here. In particular "Singing dismal hymns at a funeral for the living - serves to reinforce the theme of the writers mortality and that her feeling that her world is dying. Even the weather brings brutality to the piece, emphasising the cold desolation that is surrounding her. Dark indeed. Milly x

I have always claimed funerals are for the living, but this is the first time I've seen pen put it to paper, or in this instance a keystroke to a virtual world. I have been there before. A poignant piece for me. Thank you for sharing.