Comments : The Old Dog and The Cat (Nove Otto String / Acrostic)

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Oh I so hope someone nominates this fine piece. :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Very clever piece. So much work has gone into it. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Every now dog may say some lines
    ^
    would this flow better, "even now the dog may say some lines"?
    *Edit
    Even the dog may say some lines
    ^
    This has the required 8 syllables :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I think you are right, I have to write that line with nine syllables.

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Congratulations!

  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Congratulations, this is epic!

  • 3 years ago

    by Star

    Congrats on this powerful win ^_^