by Keira Pickard
Interesting and heartfelt to read. I liked the rhymes and metaphors throughout, and the questions you asked. Nicely done :) |
by Cianna Eleby
Thank you for the nice words. |
by Mr. Darcy
I like this! A question, self-reflection/ analysis. Seldom do we make the correct turns in order to reach our desired destination. If we did, we would only wonder if there were a better route. I think your journey is much like another. We stumble through like, making mistakes, ignoring advice and, hopefully, finding our way to happiness. Some do, some don't, but the true lesson to learn, is the way to be happy with yourself. Once that lesson is learnt, then everything else is a bonus! |
by Cianna Eleby
Thank you ! |