I think that this is my favorite poem I’ve ever read on here. My style is a bit similar so I love the flow because I can read it and feel it and it’a effortless how the words move.

“ You had the power to
wreck my womanhood
if I so much as batted
my eyelashes too fast.

No wonder I'm hesitant
to share even the dinner
dishes with you”

That’s the most powerful and beautiful thing I’ve read in a poem in a long time. This is just pure gold and all the right things and I couldn’t critique anything aside from I wish it wasn’t done! Very very beautifully written, thank you for sharing!

Beautiful read. The flow was superb. Thank you for sharing.