Comments : To God with pain

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    When focused on the divine spirit, beauty resonates on a whole new level of powerful poetry in my opinion. This is heart gripping and pure from the heart and soul. You even managed to bring some powerful rhyming couplets within this poem. Shah, you are pouring your heart and soul into these and I thank you for sharing them with us. Not a dry eye from me when I read this, very touching piece !

    • 3 years ago

      by Shah

      Many thanks for your comment.
      This poem is a true cry out of a lost soul and yes it was written with rolling tears.