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by Walter Mar 8, 2021 category : Life, society / inspirational
I throw a coin into a well High in the air and then it fell I watched it as it makes a splash Then disappear in a flash A wish was made secretly Hoping it would come to be My reflection only would appear From the water crystal clear I saw my image and then I thought My wish must have turned to naught I wished for someone I could love Then saw my image from above But maybe my wish has come true Because when I smiled, so did you No longer would I criticize With what I saw with my own eyes I walked away with that smile And for once not in denial I learnt a lesson I can't ignore That love could never be wished for Because love's a feeling which is felt Not ever a magic card that's dealt And if I first don't love myself Neither then would anyone else
by Walter
Thanks so much Brenda for the comment and nomination :)
by Brenda
Nicely rhymed and the message, spot on. We truly do need to love ourselves first.
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