Oh you are so darn graceful with your creativity within poetry!! Beautiful Luce!

Wow! Such a creative and beautiful write.

A very creative write, Lucero.

Very nice. Well done.

I really love this. There’s something so sultry and tasteful when writing about honey. It’s one of favorite things to integrate into my poems. I really enjoyed this piece and I think the end is just phenomenal. All the love yet loss and sadness into so few lines is hard to accomplish and you hit the nail on the head here. Thank you for sharing!