by Walter Mar 13, 2021
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
There are many things, that I own |
by Jack
Great poem, Perfect fit on front page! |
by Walter
Thanks Jack... And the fact it was unexpected makes it better! |
by Keira Pickard
How did I miss this one?! This is excellent, with Another great message. I love the title and how it flows, and also the perfect, neat ending. Congratulations on your win! |
by Walter
Thank you Keira for your wonderful comment. I'm truly grinning from ear to ear! |
by Mr. Darcy
So nice to see you on the front page! Well done. |
by Walter
Thank so much Mr. Darcy...very happy to be here :) |
by Everlasting
Congrats on the win. I like this poem for the lesson that it conveys. However, it could benefit with some editing to make it flow better: |
by Walter
Thank you Everlasting for your comment and alternative first stanza suggestion :) It does make it flow better. |
by Star
Reevaluating the value whatever we're trying to throw away, whether we decide to give them away or even recycle them may make a change. |
by Walter
Thanks Star! And yes, reusing or recycling seems to be the way to go with our diminishing resources. |