Misconducted Evening (Reverse Etheree)

by Star   Mar 15, 2021


Emotions unfiltered, when a lonely
sunset forgot to unravel its
colorful hues. The somber sky
dulls herself after her moon
shies away. Congested
birds sing out of tune,
an ominous
night settles
within
her.

    report violation
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  • 3 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice form. Should 'dull' be dulls?

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      I think you’re right :)
      Thank you!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Syllable count's all wrong, the wording's hopeless...
    Just joking. Love this.

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      You almost gave me a heart attack :p But for real if anything is wrong feel free to point it out , I will appreciate that. Im here to share and learn :)
      Thank you for reading Ben!

  • 3 years ago

    by Kyle

    Beautiful

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thanks!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Really lovely! I love the beautiful imagery :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thanks Keira :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this is like a dew drop or tear drop to me... just beautiful!

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      That’s why I chose reverse etheree instead of a normal etheree ^_^
      Thank you!

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