by Meena Krish Mar 16, 2021
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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by Mr. Darcy
Hello. There's a lot of sadness and inner turmoil in this write. I do like the metaphoric imagery, it lends itself well to the overall feeling of disconnected hopelessness. One small typo, I think, 'walks' should be walk. However with the title, the typo could enhance the meaning. |
by Keira Pickard
First of all, l love well written free verse, and this is exactly what l enjoy. There is such a delicate use of language and metaphors, and the descripition is superb. |
by Meena Krish
Thank you for reading and commenting; |