It’s Best To Part Ways When Rivers Diverge( Pantoum )

by Everlasting   Mar 26, 2021


Our time together has come to an end.
The roads we walk diverge.
Your path goes right and mine goes left, my friend,
Until our roads converge.

The roads we walk diverge
Like rivers that form a delta
Until our roads converge
For us to find at sea shelter

Like rivers that form a delta,
Your path goes right and mine goes left, my friend.
For us to find at sea shelter,
Our time together has come to an end.

Note:

The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8

Continue with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending stanzathen repeats the second and fourth lines of the previous stanza (as its first and third lines), and also repeats the third line of the first stanza, as its second line, and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth. So the first line of the poem is also the last.

Last stanza:

Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza

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