by Everlasting Mar 28, 2021
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
One cloudy day, |
by Jack
Nice Work:) |
by Everlasting
Thanks Jack |
by Star
you know something I always wish there are visuals for what you write, I want to see what your brain pictures. I do agree this is original, and I love it :) |
by Everlasting
Hmm, for this one, I remember seeing snapshots of childhood memories. For instance, there were few occasions when I was allowed to jump in puddles. For the most part, whenever it rained, I stayed inside. I used to catch colds so often. From time to time, I would watch my neighbor’s kids play outside under the rain and having lots of fun while I watched them from behind the garage doors. But the times I did get to play, I enjoyed it so much. On the other hand, I also enjoyed watching my neighbors play under the rain. Seeing others being content made me happy. |
by Em
This is absolutely beautiful.. Sometimes being sad an returning to the memories of our childhood where we had no worries can help so much but unfortunately, our pureness doesn't last very long nor so we all have it but this is such a lovely poem. |
by Everlasting
Thank you Em, Mr. Darcy and Keira. |
by Keira Pickard
I think you've already received basically the same comment from someone else, but still: |
by Mr. Darcy
There's nothing like returning to our 'child' to pull us from the dark shadows. Nice and original :) |