by Em
Hello there, as always it's nice to see a new piece from yoh. I've really come to enjoy your poetry and I seem to be able to relate to I quite a lot too. The title 'illusion' could be about many things as it's a distortion of senses and although illusions distort our perception they are shares by many people so I am intrigued as to know what the content will have in store, if that even makes sense. Please forgive me its 3.20am here and I've not slept lol |
by Star
WoW Em, it’s been a while since I got such a detailed comment! |
by Keira Pickard
Exactly like Em said, in the first stanza I'm unsure which thing you're talking about, the illusion or people. But that's what's so enjoyable about poetry: sometimes, you can interpret poems in your own way. |
by Star
Nice comment Keira thank you :) |