by Jessica L. Apr 2, 2021
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
It was a night like any night |
by Ben Pickard
Reminds me of the film 'Splash' which I have seen with my kids a few times. Great poem, and well rhymed throughout. |
by Jessica L.
I may have to watch that one with my little one! Thank you! :-) |
I love this tale (or should I say tail haha). The rhyming and flow was consistent, and I liked the happy ending, as I expected him to encounter a siren or someone who would try to lure him to the bottom of the sea. I always enjoy poems with that fantasy twist and who couldn't love mysterious creatures in the sea, especially mermaids? |
by Jessica L.
Thank you for bringing those mistakes to my attention, it was a late night write and I completely overlooked those errors. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem - Thank you for the kind feedback! |