Comments : Brief Travels Back in Time

  • 3 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice rhyme in this, along with nostalgic visuals! Definitely reminded me of youth, and how we could easily be blissfully unaware. And content.

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    All those things may seem ordinary but how extraordinary they are. Even the sound of the washing machine. I like the smell of clean clothes but most of all the scent of baking bread. I liked the rhyme scheme. Though I kept counting syllables to see if there was a pattern in the beat but I couldn’t find it. Regardless, the poem has good flow.