by Keira Pickard
It's a coincedence, as I love double haikus/senryus/syntuits but don't see them often. I've read two of them in the past day! |
by Em
Astounding work Hellon, |
by Mr. Darcy
Drought, unless yours blowfly. |
by Keira Pickard
Congratulations! |
by Star
Droughts are really sad, people still do suffer because of them. |
by Em
I'm overjoyed to share the front page with you Hellon. Definitely a worthy win, Congratulaions x |
I rather liked this. Particularly "no fish for dinner". |
"desiccated" is such a concrete and bleak adjective; I don't see it too often and it hit hard here as the first word. I felt the hopelessness in this, the despair, the inability to do much but anticipate death. Powerful, Hellon. |
by Jack
Nice and short poem! |
by Everlasting
Congratulations on the win |
by Mr. Darcy
I've always liked the word, 'dedicated', I think this came from mum's jam sponge with sprinkled dedicated coconut. Yum! As for these haiku's the imagery is powerful as is the suffering. I presume that the dried river is due to man disturbing the flow and to hell with the consequences! |