by Em
I like what you did with this one Craig, the title stands out and I think you did that purposefully because men have to live up to this expectation they they're the stronger sex etc etc and it's a lot of bs because it's so wrong this is why alot of domestic violence cases against men aren't seen and its totally wrong and that men are told to 'man up', I know this isn't about that but it just goes to show thelat we as are society are so warped into following instead of going against the crowd. |
by Meena Krish
This is pretty, sweet and beautiful penned and in that small verse, there is a deep emotion which flourished in the last line! I'm not sure if my comment made any sense.. |