Drowning (Senryu)

by ddavidd   Apr 10, 2021



Sea water inflames
my guts like a lonely man
in the sea of folks.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    I totally get this, I wish I'd have been quick enough to nominate as it would have surely picked up my vote as I'm certainly able to relate to this alot, well, apart from the man part - add hu(man) and we're cooking with gas!!
    Take care,
    Em x

    • 3 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Em, I feel already nominated because of you, the rest is just pride.

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