by Maher
Nicely written. I like how each line is it's own separate thought that you need to ponder on. Had me asking myself about each one, which is a brilliant way to get the reader involved. |
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by Ben Pickard
Like a rubber band that just won’t break |
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by Mr. Darcy
I like the simile of a rubber band - it made me think of this song:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jdiB3cISeBk |
I had never heard that song. I was more thinking about how they tell you to wear a rubber and and snap it to help with negative thoughts/emotions. |