Comments : Grandpa’s Bedtime Story ( part 1 ) Epic Poem

  • 3 years ago

    by Jack

    This took my breath away! If the next one is 100 times as long I would read the whole thing!!!!

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you. I hope it won’t disappoint.

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I meant to say, I hope part 2 of this bedtime story won’t be a disappointment. Not sure when I’ll finish it though. Thank you for reading it. It means a lot.

  • 3 years ago

    by Lost star

    Everlasting this is such a wonderful poem, I can see why this was in your three, it has such an abosrbing almost fairytale narrative quality to it . I love it.

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Lost Star. It means a lot.