When the Hats Became a Home (NaPoWriMo day 14)

by Star   Apr 15, 2021


Once upon a time
The Mad Hatter met
The Cat in the Hat.

Both were confused,
concerned a little bit,
sullen, and stunned.

With their new little
friends, fearlessly
fooling on their heads.

Few mocking birds
bravely busted
their peculiar hats,

with twigs and twines
and everything that
shines.

They’re friends for now,
and no one knows when
will this end and how.

***Prompt by Everlasting from NaPoWriMo 2021 thread.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    First of all, wow. I love the creativity! This got me smiling specially because of the alliteration and the rhymes here and there. Just one tiny thing:

    They’re friends for now,
    and no knows when will
    this end and how.

    Did you mean “no one knows?”

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      I actually wanted to attempt a Rondeau with this idea, but got busy and I hat to post something :)
      You’re right I meant no one know.
      Thank you ^_^

    • 3 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Ah! Well, I hope to eventually see that rondeau once you have time

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Probably after NaPoWriMo, a poem a day that's a challenge for me :)

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