this is a very well writen poem. tell ur sis i say so. i know how it feels to love one person, but be inlove with someone else. going through it right now. newayz, keep up the good work!

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Hey, Love your poem! One of my favorites!

hey i like your poem keep writing check out mine there not great but worth a try

This was EXCELLENT! so many people can probably relate!

This is the most beautiful poem <3 I would be falling apart just like her if I were in that situation. Your sisters writing is absolutely beautiful, and tell her to keep writing! And I hope her crisis ends in a happy ending :)

thats such a touching poem, ur sis has such talent! reminds me of past experiences, thanx!

Many of the feelings expressed in this poem, I have felt too. You did a great job writing this poem.

This is really good ! keep it up!