by Star
If you havent mentioned phobias, and stopped before the fifth stanza, this would’ve been really dark!! Anyways this is very clever, love it :) |
by Keira Pickard
. . . Snakes?! |
by Mr. Darcy
there is something about snakes that make them something to fear. Like your poem depicts, but without saying, they look and move in ways that are sinister. Nothing that looks like that can be good. As for the phobia they really can and do induce a heart rate that can deem the person unconscious. |