Comments : Blood and Blossom

  • 3 years ago

    by Maher

    Well written, this in particular, even though it's the shortest verse:

    "he who creates the walls and borders
    and wars to protect them."

    Even though I might not agree with the ending. a good write is a good write. Thanks for sharing :)

    • 3 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you Maher, means a lot coming from you.

      About the ending, I kind of see your point, but it would become very lengthy if I explain why I had to end like that. I might change it when I have energy to touch it structuraly.