I enjoyed all of the poem, but the fifth stanza was absolutely amazing, I have to say! It's a very true message, and a good one at that.
It's well rhymed and interesting. I love poems that tell a story and you've told it perfectly.
I didn't think they were any problems at all with the context - I thought it was all well worded and also well thought out. But - as I am a grammar obsessed maniac, lol - I spotted a couple of ( unsurprisingly! ) grammar errors.
1) in the last line of the second stanza, did you mean " you're the only one " instead of " your the only one", as 'you're' is a contraction of 'you are'?
2) in the fourth stanza, I think in ' directly into the kids eye', ' kids ' needs an apostrophe before the s.
3) in the fifth stanza ( my favourite!), There might be a typo in ' the most beautiful thinks you can't see'. ' the most beautiful THINGS you can't see'?
4) in the second to last stanza, did you mean thanks instead of thank ?
5) also in the second to last stanza, in the last line, see point 2!
I might be mistaken myself, and (if I'm not) then these are really easy mistakes to make, which I do the whole time! You don't have to make any of the changes, either :)
Anyway, aside from me being like a crotchety old English teacher, I really enjoyed your poem!