by Keira Pickard
Wonderful senryu. The title is so clever and works really well with the rest of the text. I also like how you've centered it |
by Walter
Thank you Keira for your thoughts and comments. I think when working with a senryu and only 17 syllables, the title does play a lot into it. |
by Em
Hello Walter, |
by Walter
Hi Em and wow! Thanks for such an amazing comment :) My thought process seems to go through similar scenarios when reading or writing a senryu and we each relate it to what we feel or have gone through. And as always, your analysis is spot on! Thanks again Em x |
by Mr. Darcy
Clever musings, it almost doesn't need a 3rd line. ;) |
by Walter
Thank you Mr. Darcy and yes, I thought exactly the same thing when writing the third line! |
Very succinct. |
by Walter
A big thanks also Andrew :) |