holy crap...that was possibly the best poem i have read on this site...it sounds real and true...please read my poems and comment...i need your advice on them

oh wow... that was just amazing...

auwww,,,,that is the best poem!!! i wish people have time to read it,,,,its like,,,, the best!!!=D,,i really really liked it,,,,,,=D

and plzz,,,if u have time,,, check out my poems,,]
i need your opinion cause you are a very good writer!!!=D

Beautiful poem