Staring At The Window (Haiku)

by Jack   May 7, 2021


Staring At The Window.

I stare out the pane,
It is so clear to me now,
Things are getting bright.

*Haiku: Three line poem with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second and another 5 in the last. (Idea from Keira Pickard.)

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  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I am going to presume you meant 'brighter' literally and metaphorically, in which case, this is excellent, Jack, especially for one so young. But even if it was only ever literal, this is inspiring.

    Take care

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack

      Thanks Ben!

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Lovely, thoughtful piece. I spend my whole time perching on my window sill, just thinking about a variety of different things. I like the footnote! :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Jack

      Thanks!

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