by Keira Pickard
Really lovely. I like how you didn't capitalize the letters, but I think that maybe punctuate the end of each sentence to make it clear that they're three different sentences? |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Keira, for your suggestions and typo spot. |
by Mr. Darcy
Reading this reminds me of recent walks through bluebell woods. I tried to capture the swathes of deep indigo but my camera phone failed. Still, if I need reminding, I'll just come back here. |
by Ben Pickard
Interesting thoughts, Michael. All I would say though is that, contrary to popular belief, the seasons shouldn't be capitalized. But I certainly see your other points. I only ever use lower case throughout in somthing I regard as a 'delicate' write, otherwise, I'm a traditionalist all the way! |
by Em
This is absolutely beautiful and full of lovely imagery. I feel it may symbolise more but I cannot put my hand on it.... Take care, |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Em. |
by Meena Krish
Interesting form! Have to try it, well penned. |