mortality is finnicky.

by prasanna   May 20, 2021


a songbird cries, and the dull ache of
loneliness creeps in like an assassin,
placing the blade to rest deep within
the second intercoastal space, and i
placate myself with platitudes for
the time being.

you once said you were convinced
i was hallowed, and i believe you –
i echoed your songs for days after
you last sung them. i made peace
with being a temporary safe-haven.

i don’t mind being your song’s
last echo, because death is gentle
with you by it’s side.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Rayven

    I often find love poems to be full of cliches, even when they are dealing with heavy emotions. Your poems always break the cliche mold and each poem feels unique and different each time.

    There are so many directions I could go here with my thoughts but the first instinct I have is that a songbird is a simile to someone you once knew. Each time you hear one, you feel lonely because you miss the person you speak about. It feels ?one someone is stabbing you over and over again and because of that, it's difficult to verbalize your emotions to anyone, so you try to pretend you don't hurt.

    You were this person's safe haven as much as they were yours and each small thing reminds you of that. It's never easy going through death, but it seems like in the last stanza you made peace with it. The last line of the poem is stunning as well because it tells the reader everything. This person is one of the most caring people ever.

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