Comments : Twelve Million

  • 3 years ago

    by Keira Pickard

    I became completely lost and tongue twisted halfway through this, lol. But, seriously, I enjoyed this.
    Welcome to poems and quotes!

    • 3 years ago

      by ted_thepoet

      Thx! I used RhymeDesk for the last 2 lines because I had trouble rhyming. Here's the link if you wanna try it! https://www.rhymedesk.com/

    • 3 years ago

      by ted_thepoet

      I never thought one of my rhymes could be channeled for a tongue twister.

    • 3 years ago

      by ted_thepoet

      Oh I forgot that I heard about this site through RhymeDesk so you probably heard abt it

  • 3 years ago

    by Jack

    This is a great poem! Sounds great when you read it aloud!

  • 3 years ago

    by ted_thepoet

    Okay so the rhyme scheme is complicated since it's a different rhyme scheme for every verse but I eventually figured out that it's ABCB for the first verse, ABBA for the second verse and ABCA for the third verse