A Foreseen Disaster

by Star May 22, 2021 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems

I
saw your
thoughts through
your glistening eyes
e
r
u
p
t
i
n
g

I
for the
first time
feared
you

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3 years ago
by Ben Pickard

This actually works reading it back to front, too.
Excellent
- 3 years ago
  by Star
  
  That wasnt intentional, thank you :)
3 years ago
by prasanna

Eyes are truly a gateway into one's soul. Consider maybe adding in 'as' before "I/for the..." to help with the flow?
- 3 years ago
  by Star
  
  I will consider that, thanks :)
3 years ago
by Everlasting

Sometimes a look in the eyes say more than words can say.
- 3 years ago
  by Star
  
  Yes!!!!! Thanks for reading ^_*

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