by Sunshine
I enjoyed every stanza and how natural the words fit together. You delivered those lines beautifully, but that last part was everything. Very meaningful too. As usual, amazing work. |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you so much for your time, Rania. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
by Keira Pickard
In the first two lines, I loved the use of floral imagery - but my question is do you know what the flowers actually are? Lol. |
by Ben Pickard
A wonderful and insightful comment, Keira. Thank you.x |
by Jack
Great Poem! I really liked it! Glad its nominated! |
by Ben Pickard
Thank you, Jack |
by Star
This had a beautiful rhythm to it, delivers the words in a gentle way!! Very good , glad to see it nominated :) |